Title
Give your story a captivating title!
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The boy who went to The Lost House
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Introduction
Who?
Characters - describe your characters in detail.
What?
What is happening? What is the situation?
What is happening to your characters?
What are they doing?
What are they saying?
When?
When is your story set?
Where?
Describe the setting of your story
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His name is Joe
Very Sensitive to others
Kindful to other people
Scared of Haunted house
It was set in Joe’s friend’s house
Him and his friends were going for camping at the dark forest and then they discover a very strange house.
Then they were arguing about the forest that they didn't want to come to.
So Joe’s friends were separate from their camping space and he was the only one in the camping space
it was Set in a Joe’s house with lots of pictures, Toys, and a Computer and it was coloured with blue of the wall paper.
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Dilemma
What is the cause of the problem?
What are the characters doing? Have you describe their feelings?
Include language features to support key ideas.
Simile
Metaphors
Onomatopoeia
Personification
Include some engaging dialogue in your story. “ “
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One of Joe’s friends were telling that the forest was creepy and dark and then they start to argue about the dark spooky forest.
Joe’s friends were walking lonely away from Joe and trying make them feel calmful while Joe was sitting in the bench talking to his mind like a creepy stalker talking to himself.
Joe was sad because he wanted to have great fun camping then suddenly they start fighting over them
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Expand - Entertain your readers some more!
What more does your readers need to know about the problem?
Add more interesting dialogue
Describe the characters actions and feelings in detail
Include language features to support key ideas.
Simile
Metaphors
Onomatopoeia
Personification
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How to make Joe’s friends feel happy and excited and sorting out the problem later.
When Joe’s Friends walk away, They can have some time and then sort out the problem of there camping day.
They Enjoyful
They Encourage each other
They like to do happy stuff together
They simile to others
Happy of doing fun things that they wanted to do.
Sometimes they feel sad that they never get to go any without their parents permission
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Solve
How was the problem solved?
What happened to the characters?
Describe the setting
What is the moral of the story?
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When Joe’s Friends Left, He went to go and get them and bring them back to the house that they saw.
They were calm now because Joe sort out the argument's.
The forest was spooky with spiders in cobwebs.
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